Very good I love this poem and I feel where u r comin from keep it up 5/5

I like it!! and if i get what your saying at the end you want to but dont'and always cant loose him!! i'm in the same boat!! i know what your going through!! keep writing!! nice work!!

I totally feel you...i'm losing my love, but i'm not sure how i'll survive without him...great poem...i loved it. 5/5.