This was a really good poem. Definitely not 'shitty' because you put a lot of heart and emotion into it. That alone creates a beautiful poem. Poems are personal, so it's not fair for others to judge, but oh well :P

I agree with Darien. I am so proud of you for putting something so personal and emotional for you up here. You keep it up and NEVER give up hope. You hear me?
5/5

Really good poem. I loved it. it's really good and nobody has the right to judge anybody. Take care and thanks for reading my poem :)

I love this poem and the way it treated such a delicate subject

keep it up

take care

Her Guardian

After a very very long time, i today decided to surf around and read poems & i am just so glad to be here. i read your profile and then this poem. I felt the sadness in every single word & i met pain through your poem but moreover i would like to appreciate you for sharing your feelings.

I am sure life will make up for breaking such precious heart....just have faith.

all the best and take care

Your pain can be felt in these words you have expressed in this write, may you find the peace that you seek deep within your heart.

Take care

Sadaddy