This is a great poem!!! I Love it, keep up the good work!!!! look at some of my poems if you want to sometime and rate and comment about them!!! GOOD JOB!!!!

Nice job i can feel the pain in the poem it's very deep keep up the good work 5.5

This is a exteamly good poem,, loved the 3rd stanza,, tnx for ur comment and votes,,
lots of lovin
**doz an1c me**

This is definately (i dunno if that's the correct way of spelling it..lol who cares) one of my favorite poems from u, i like specially the beggining, i dunno the first part simply captivates me:

"She's writing another I miss you letter
You're leaving another unanswered heart
You're shattering her unbreakable heart
You're mistaking her unmistakable cries "

..You're mistaking her unmistakable cries.. awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bai bai

MPHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I think this is excellent! eventhough you don't rhyme ypou have a very nice flow...