Wow, amazing work on this poem. It has such a strong message. People should stop judging and see how they can try to help. You did a beautiful job on this poem. So much thought was put into it. Definetly worth the read.

Maybe you could change "pre-judging" to "prejudice"? you said you were planning to revise this, but i do think its pretty good as it is. well done.

You said you had problems to understand the first line? Well, the first line is actually the easiest to understand.
Ich vermisse dich, hast du gesagt
it's just: I miss you, you said
ausgerechnet jetzt hast du es gewagt
just now you have dared
ausgerechnet jetzt zu dieser Zeit
just now at this time...
and so on!

With this poem I just wanted to see what others think or say because I always have to rate and comment on English poems! But unfortunately there aren't many people who speak German well! Maybe you can take a look on my English poems and let me know what you think!