Wow this poem is better than the first one.. Great job and I love all your work.. This poem is full of emotion and well put together... keep it up.. Your an amazing poet!!! 5/5

Aww this is so sad...don't worry she'll come 2 realise one day tha she gave up on sumone really great. 5/5

That was even better than the first one! you have a real nack for this stuff! i really encourage you to get this published. if i could rate it a 10/10 i would! But 5/5/ is the best, so keep it up!

This poem is just as great as your others! youre a great poet!...