I can really relate to this poem. the only thing was that i'm a sucker for the whole rhyming and flow thing and yea.... I kind of felt like it was just a whole heap of thoughts... which is good... but... ah man i'm so bad at this... keep working on it.. cause you've got the flow... I can't wait to read more... if u need to talk I'm free anytime... *hugs*

I like this alot, simply because I have kinda the same thing going on im my life right now. It also reminds me of my writting becase im not much of a rhymer. Keep up the good work.

Good work. Keep it up.

It doesn't matter if it rhymes or not, All that matters is the heart and feeling you put into it. Enough said. You put your heart into this, the poem is self expression, I think you did a great, no... A way better than great job on this. You're Awesome in my book. Thank you for sharing. You're really really awesome. 900,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 000 out of 5!

Again, Thank you, Jessica!

That was a great poem it explained how our parents can be good job keep it up oh and email me if you want to