Ahh oi cant wait to read part IV..i am off! THis one was so far the most intense. I cant wait to find out what happens..nice job with telling your reader what they need to know adn still allowing your reader to use there own imaginations!! :)

Keep it up!! LISSA

Yes, yes, I LOVE IT...your an awesome poet!!! keep em coming!!!!!!

later
Jenna

Way to share your true feelings! 5/5 i am speachless! really

WOW!!!!!! this is just a really great poem! i cant wait to read the next!...great job!...
~Sandra~