Wow i love this, even if its short, it's so good & so much detail LOVE IT 5!!

Very nice. You are very good with words and great at creating a picture in the mind...love it.

Very nice. You are very good with words and great at creating a picture in the mind...love it.

Its wicked, quite honestly. Imagery = fantastic and the use of words is cool as well

Its short but wicked. Good wording.
Becca xx