Comments : I seen you again today

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    Surprise twist, what a great ending. I'm sorry you feel that way about yourself, you should be proud. Awesome writing, keep smiling.
    ~Jaime

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Good poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    It was cool. Good work! *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Totally realistic. very good way to explain your point and i agree. i hate when this happens. keep the beautifulness up

  • 18 years ago

    by Cloe

    Tim, I'm sorry you feel that way...

    -Cloe

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I love this poem great work
    thank you for entering in my competition
    emma

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Wow so many people can relate to this peom it was well written too i have nothing bad to say about it. :)
    But its sad that anyone would feel that way :(
    Love Always --
    --NerdyPants

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow, another gr8 work of poetry. i can sence the emmotion in these poems. wonderful work!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I had to read this twice! i love the twist at the end! xkimx

  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    5/5 i liked it aalot

  • 18 years ago

    by Georgia

    This blew me away. 10/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Awwww....don't give up... w/e u do.. if you need anyone to talk to... im here for you! ok?

    hugs,
    michelle

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalika

    I want to say that I enjoyed the poem; it flowed nicely, and was well written. It was very sad, and, although it was short, you managed to fit a lot of emotion into few words. Impressive.

    However, I would simply like to point out that, gramatically, it is "I saw you again today" rather than "I seen you today again". This was not ment as a criticism, simply pointing it out.

    Keep it up, you're a great writer.

    Kalika