Surprise twist, what a great ending. I'm sorry you feel that way about yourself, you should be proud. Awesome writing, keep smiling.
~Jaime

Good poem 5/5

It was cool. Good work! *5/5*

Totally realistic. very good way to explain your point and i agree. i hate when this happens. keep the beautifulness up

Tim, I'm sorry you feel that way...

-Cloe

I love this poem great work
thank you for entering in my competition
emma

Wow so many people can relate to this peom it was well written too i have nothing bad to say about it. :)
But its sad that anyone would feel that way :(
Love Always --
--NerdyPants

Wow, another gr8 work of poetry. i can sence the emmotion in these poems. wonderful work!
~*Who Cares?*~

I had to read this twice! i love the twist at the end! xkimx

5/5 i liked it aalot

This blew me away. 10/5!

Awwww....don't give up... w/e u do.. if you need anyone to talk to... im here for you! ok?

hugs,
michelle

I want to say that I enjoyed the poem; it flowed nicely, and was well written. It was very sad, and, although it was short, you managed to fit a lot of emotion into few words. Impressive.

However, I would simply like to point out that, gramatically, it is "I saw you again today" rather than "I seen you today again". This was not ment as a criticism, simply pointing it out.

Keep it up, you're a great writer.

Kalika