THATS SOOOO CUTE!!!!lol, good job!

Good job ! 5/5 ! thanks for the comment by the way ! i think you really gave an honest opinion. i just couldn`t find anything that rhymed anymore so i worked with it. =] but thanks anyways !

Awe i loved it .... i like it a lot a lot lol...great job Xox laura marie aka sweets

Wow, really deep poem. Keep up the good work