Thx for the comment. this is sad but i like it! good job!

Well, this is indeed sad..it's always hard to loose the ones you love, i just went through it...if you wonna talk im here...it was short, but none the less..it was awesome!

*sigh* so uve gone thro it too......:*(
everyone loses sumone they really love and is close to.
in my case, it was Brandon. he was seven months old......
i feel ur pain, becuz everytime i see his pics, i kno i cant bring him back.....*tears
sympathy for you
-steph

I feel sorry for you, I know how you feel... Your poem was written extremely well though, It's simple but it doesn't need to be any longer. There's so much sadness within it... It's touching. Wonderful job! =)