Awesome.....like awesome.......I serious I actually read all of that one ;)

Ill vote too

Matt

Wooooah! Powerful stuff! I really liked it was so awesome. I like the end bit. 'I pray that you have fun'. It was just a great way to end it. Anyway... Great write. Hehe. 5.
Take Care, Elle Stevens xxx

Another beautiful poem. I loved this one aswell. I love your work. The way you write is amazing. An all the feelings en emotions you put in it. Wonderful poem. It's more then just excellent. Well done once again girl =) Love you sweety -xxx-

GREAT POEM
but i love you
doesnt that count for anything
*cries*
anyway
I really truely love this poem
Your unfriendly neighbourhood vampiress

Wwwhooaaahhh. dude. thats....amazing. such great flow, and ideas are great. it seems like something youd read in school, but then youd get sent to the counsler...and thats not fun. good job.

Wow suzie your poetry has imporved soo much!!! how r u? havent taked in ages!! lol i saw the commetn on he contest by mister retribution, so this ismy way of replying. love this poem. one of the best of urs iv read (and iv read alot!!) take care

Ruby

I will give u 10/5 great piece of writing just amazing.....nice imagery has been used rather its very sad bt too good as a poetry luv ya...pal

Amazing poem. It was so well written.

After reading one of your works, I became courious about the rest...different is good....book material here...I would read it...

I READ IT AGAIN!
lol
anyway, hope to cya at the movies.
I'll use all my power and strength to get there (theres not much, im very restricted)

cya round
suz