by Cueball24
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Good. Great even!! Keep it up!! |
by Monika
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Great poem its so cute great job |
by Amanda
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Thx, this is sweeet |
by aaron c s
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Sweet and sincere. i liked it. i didnt like the flow of it though. it stopped too much i felt. each was its own poem of two lines. i liked the words and the feeling behind it though so i gave u a 5 |
by Reem O
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This is very romantic..i hope ull find this perfect boy that that will keep u safe n happy. very emotional 5/5 |
by Gretchen
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I really liked what your were saying but I agree that it was pretty choppy with just 2 lines. Good job |