Omfg thats amazing!! 5/5!!! i love it
its long but it keeps you interested for the whole time (if that makes sense :P) which is whata good poem should b like. thnx 4 all the comments
im soo adding u 2 my favs:P
luv ya amy

Wow this was amazing, your a really beautiful writer.
good luck with your an upcoming one, and i appreciate your comment:]

Awesome poem, very beautifully written. 5/5 i love it. thanks for all the comments and keep writing i love reading your poems.
~April