Because it reminds me of a cliche teenaged poem, I don't want to give it a five, but because I am guilty of writing cliche teenaged poems, I can't give it less than a three... And I don't want you to think i'm saying that how you feel is cliche, so i give it a four. How you are feeling is really important and writing about it helps you get more in touch with how you feel, but if you expand on some of those lines like "Down a lonely road I walk alone" it could really be amazing.
4 years ago
by Ben Pickard
I actually think this is powerfully and well written. I like it.