"Will knives embrase your back"

embrace*

"When your thinking of how much i love you"

you're*

And if you could capitalize all the I's that would be nice, although it isn't necessary... it's just some people get annoyed at things like that....

Anyway, other than those minor grammatical mistakes, the poem is amazing and full of intense emotion! I loved it! It made my sad.... Wow! It's GREAT! Good job, sweetie! You are an amazing writer!

Love always,

~BJ~

Awww...i loved everypart of that poem... Me and mah bf jus broke up and i know how you feel.... good job...

xox pixie

Aww..wow Mall you are great!! I loved it!! Love ya
Forever And For Always,
Your Loving Friend,
Heather

You have a talent, and don't let anyone tell you you don't, keep writing i love your work so much, comment on mine if u get a chance

This is is good Mallory! 5/5

Mallori

I like it alot

I llooooooooooveeeedddd it

Good stuff, wish i was that awesome

This poem is really great! i love you gurl!