What a cute poem!! i love it!! very well written!! nice work!! your a good writter!! comment back if you would!

Wow 5/5 so cute..so tru...so in love. i love this i love the gentle words u used to describe how u feel its jus pure amazing. keep it up.

regards,
sonam

When you are close,
they have a smell,
makes you wanna do things,
that could send you to hell,

Excellent lines! Amazing work you did. I love it. Keep up the great work. I give you a 5.

Babe... this is a really good poem..... i really like that line too... "when u are close....."

I can relate to this poem : ) i really enjoyed reading it great job!