This was very sweet and touching, well done
xxALLYxx

This is a great poem! 5/5

This poem is so touching and amazing poem so heartfelt i loved it so much great job

Hmm this is good, some of the thoughts seem to jump around a bit, but i like the first and third stanzas.

I agree it jumps around alot but it must mean something to you. I'd just clean up the few misspelled words and it should be fine. :)

This is sad... I'm sorry your Uncle passed away, he seemed like a great guy... and the fact that I can get that just from that poem means a lot.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Thats better :) yes yes yes, but there are still spelling and grammer mistakes, i wont list them all as im sure u can spot them yourself if u read through it.

not sure wots going on with the first two lines...are they part of the poem???

there are some lines which sort of go together in pairs, if you know what i mean (eg.Your daughters grown up/Your sons messed up)
this is a nice effect and works well

-biscuit-