Thats amazing, your really good keep up the good work

Very good, and very true. But things like this happen, they seem to take over our life, we dont know why we are cutting, we don't know how to stop, but we know deep down that it isnt the answer. Well written, good job
love Tara-Kay
xxxx

Hey, Thats a real deep poem. I really felt what you were saying! Great work! Keep it up! 5/5
Bec xx

Wow...excellent poem. i loved it. i can kinda relate.

So i dont really like these type of poems. contentwise

but i do love this: Its a never ending game,
do i give in,
or give up?