Hmm...this got me thinking, lol. great work once again. its wonderful how you just let your thoguhts flow out, and get such amazing work Nitin. 5/5
xoxo
Monique

Graet poem Nitin. u write excellent dark poems but ur other poems are also too good.
i m blown man........5/5
u hav said so true abt journey called LIFE....

good job dear!!!!

I liked how you showed two sides of the story in this poem... good work..
keep writing... 5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

This is a very good poem, liked it alot. its very welll written

You've summed up the greatest mystery in such few words!
great job my friend!

love and luck
shobhana

Nitin
This really makes one think. You always have such good advice for me. You have showed me meaning for life.
Good job!
Thank you
Cindy