Brillian flow and fantastic content, the vocab and emotions are strong and perfectly used.

5/5

Great poem....not one of your best but still really great...
And yes i do still stand by what i said in "Masquerade"...you should send some of your poems into publishers...im not sure if you could like write a book of poetry...but its worth a try...you've got a better shot at it then most poets i know...its just teh way you word your poems...its almost like shakespeare...but better because its not about love or any crap like that...so yeah i still stand by it...

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