OMG sweety that was sad but very well written i love it great job. i love reading ur poemsa and very nice, keep writting hun. xxoxo Rach

This poem is like in(i would use a inappropriate word, but this thing wont let me) good,, like in really extreamly good,,i loved the ending,, and basicly the whole thing,, really madly truly,, loved it

**doz an1c me**

Wow. this poem brought a tear to my eye lol. i can relate to this.
keep up the great work
love jess XXX

Loved this poem, very well done!
its wonderful.
take care
x x x

Si...OMG! *tear* brave-o brave-o! that was absolutley brilliant. It brought tears to my eyes. I hope everything is ok. I love you sooooooo much sierra. Great poem 5/5 id ramble on some more about how much i love this poem but, itd take a looooooong time and alot of space...plus I have to go reserch Botulism...so....I'll praise you latter babe!
xoxo
chelsea

Brilliant. full of expression and flows fantastically. thje vocab and descriptions are very effective and clear.

5/5