AWESOME POEM. 5/5. It captures the innocence of little kids for a second and seems almost bittersweet when you look back on it. It flows great. Keep up the good work :)

Wicked poem, i liked the whole concept and it gave me a sense of inspiration too, meaning things may be hard now but when we look back they won't really mean as much to us, all the bad ones anyways and i agree with jaklynn, it's bittersweet!
5/5

Brilliant poem!really insperational! , it is full of meaning and gets to the heart!!! keep wrighting!! xxx

Calm poem! it seem you time to do much, by looking back its amazing how much you done already. no can say no to this waounderful poem. never stop writing.:)

Nice Poem!!! It's all good...love it!
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So cherish those memories,
Because you can't relive the past.
Even though you can't go back,
You can always make them last.

What an absolutely stunning way to end an even more stunning poem

im proud to be part of a site with people like you in it! Youre amazing...keep writing
Dhaval

Brilliant work.. I dont really know what else to say but WOW..

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