You are doing good on this one i think that this one needs no work.

heather

Good poem luv it
i was going to seperate it but i forgot ill do it now
thanx

Please tell me if it is better

Thanx alot thanx for reading them

luv tabby

Aww hun really sad but cute in the same way.. Great write and guys can be so stupid sometimes...
!^I love being in love^!

Great Poem ... I went through sort of the same thing just not sleeping with a guy ... woah ... and it's not a girl. But losing a friend sucks ... really bad when they mean the most to you ... hope you two worked it out.

Nice attitude, i''m sure you gurlz worked it out in the end, right? well you did an awsum job on writing this poem anyways! well done!
luv em