Yeah I have been thru some of these with my mom. But I learned that I am making better choices from her mistakes.
Very Good.
~*~Heather~*~

Love it. the meaning is exellent. i loved how it ended on a moral almost. well done

Ruby

Wow such truth and so poetic 5/5 lets hope people get the message loud and clear =)

Wow thts was brillant. 5/5 so true n others should really think of this cos most ppl don't care and don't think it'll have any effect of their kids. great work.
from becca x

Thats true...very intersting poem...I like it...hope to read more.

Hey

great poemn i loved it sooooo true keep it up you got a good talent you no keep up the hard work!!!!

Thats right juls..
This one is pretty good btw...7/5
Well i hope everything is doing find4u.
Cuz I feel so happy..lol...
I Start working at 1pm till 10pm....
Stupid hour..but i like that..lol..23$/h
Well keep up ur good work juls..
take care
alexox

Wow this poem is so true. Awesome work. You started strong ended strong, I can never do that...haha. The flow, the format, everything was perfect. Great job.

This was my favorite part:

Curses, oh the profanity
those little ears hear
Are the first to come
out of their mouth when
they can speak clear

Wow I really loved this poem. It was great. I think you hit the jackpot. You were so right. I gave it a 5 only because thats the highest I could give it...Again really great poem.... You got real talent