LOLLL awesome!!!

Oh my, I was thinking naughty O_O

I love Dr.Pepper!!!
(you still owe me pie and red bull BTW)

Great poem, great words and really made me laugh!!!

Well done xD

Omg that was so hilarious haha

20/5

Thats very good....that really made me laugh...well I hope to read more funny ones by you...lataz

F'ing funny dude, even funnier than mine but dude this stuff is so funny...nice job.

~Matt~

Awesome job on this write Kilman ,

The ending was so unexpected ...making it even funnier

This was f'n funny its really good better then my bros...haha j/k

I love this, I'm a Dr Pepper fan, too! Great write!

I love this, I'm a Dr Pepper fan, too! Great write!

Nice poem.. i really liked the mystery it created

THATS THE BEST!!!!!!!

A cold doctor pepper lol advertiser jks this is awesome now you must rate mine jks you don't have to if you don't wanna lol like i said it was great

LOL. nice poem. made me laugh

LOL. nice poem. made me laugh