Wow . excellent. amazingly written,
i hope it isnt true...cuz ive seen how fathers abuse mothers first hand...
if it is..

im here to talk if u want
5/5

Holy! You did an awesome Job on that one! I am definately adding you to my Favorites.. You're awesome.

Again, Grand and exhilerating poem!

Wow, This is sad. Yet well written I am sorry this happen. I know sometimes it seems like people don't want to turn away, but I hope everything goes well for you.
~*~Heather~*~

Very, Very, Very Good, it truely touches ones feelings. Its a Sad, Sad situation, but the poem you wrote is a work of art.

Omg that is so sad
i'll pray to god its not true
almost made me cry
youre going to my favouries!!
cya

OMG I LOVE IT ITS SOOOOO GOOD!!

This amazing you have real talent i really liked it a lot

Holy crap. that has to be the best poem ive read on here. im speechless. -k-

Omg that was so good im so sorry if this has happed 2 you if you ever need 2 talk im so here for you thats a promice okay take care love lots jOsIe

That's Soo Good.. It's Soo Deep.. But It Seems Soo Real.
You Have Real Good Tallent.

This a great poem. Abuse is so dumb. I've been through it with my mother before. It's terrible. But keep up the great work!

Wow thats really sad... tha emotion was captured really well tho,... amazing... big hugz... *cries*

Wow. Amazing poem. I hope it isn't true. I would have killed him 2, but I probily wouldn't have gone to jail cuz I would tell the cops it was self defence for my mom who would be to scared to tell someone she loved. I have an airsoft gun, and that might not kill someone unless they got shot in the neck.
5/5. Great poem, keep up the great work.

♥Nella

Wow, deep. u r a good poet keep it up.

I really like it.. its deep and emotional.. lovez it. keep ur shit up haha

WOW i really enjoyed reading this one...I hope your mom isnt abused...another well written poem...Great Job..Joc

That is a truely grrt poem that i hope isnt truu.....so much abuse...well thx for ur comments and keep writing!!
love ya lots,
sore

BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES CUZ I FEEL THAT PAIN