Wow great poem!!!!!!!!

Nice work!! i like it!! i know what its like to hear his name and ache and to not be able to let go!! keep the writing up!! comment back if you would please!! take care!! read my someday it might help!!

Amazing! It's like, you're taking the words from my mouth and forming a poem with them. That's EXACTLY how I feel at this moment. Great job! I loved this. =) 5/5!

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You can tell the impact this love has had!! The way you ache and yearn for him to come back!! I've been there before!! Great poem!! I love it!! 5/5

Lovely poem. I really liked it. Great job. You're a great writer, never stop writing.

Thanks for commenting on mine. :-)