Another wonderful poem this is very good!
tabby

Stand tall and deliver
Act upon your word
No shame no shiver
Shout loud be heard

That part gave me goosebumps..again Bil excellent write..I really liked that last line...your ending was perfect!

That's so good, as usual I guess, your poems are always so inspirational!

Wonderful!! So powerful and deep - The message so clear and concise. Well written my friend!

Beautifully done and so darn true! Excellent, I love it! Great job, Bill! ;o)

Wow.good job
evey man should read that poem
and may they truly know the meaning of a great man.
very good job

Terrific write there Bill!!! I really loved this one. The flow and the message were superb. Especially the last stanza. Well done, guy!

Mr. Bill;

Lately, i have come across poems that have managed to inpact my life someway or another. Its amazing how easily words can change your presective on things and help you let many things go that at one point you just thought you couldn't. I want to thank you for posting this poem and i am grateful i came across this poem when i did because i needed to read something like this to let me know that everything is going to be okay. I admire your prespective on life and your words of wisdome absolutely amazing poem.....
take care always
Miss.Scooby

Control your soul - such a beautiful way to express what one must do to be right in the world. beautiful expressions and a poignant message.

happy writing
shobhana