A really cool and soft poem, with a interesting story and a nice finish.

This has an interesting style that almost entrances the reader to read on.

thanks for commenting on my poem.
let me know what you think of my other stuff and i'l return the favour.

xox

Short and GREAT. I'm really liking your poetry. =) And though this one was small, It went pretty well. I actually liked it alot. Keep it up. And thank you for your comment.s 5/5

`Taleeee. xx.

P.S I'm adding you to my favourites =)

That was a really different way of putting it, and I really liked it... nice job... you definitely have some talent... keep it up!

Vrey symbolic, i like how u repeat 'as if from a dream' it concludes the poem nicely xx