Comments : Like Gold Never Old

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow! No wonder it's on the front page... short but yet, heartfelt..You can feel your emotions!! Glad I took the time to read it!!

    Take Care and Comment Back!
    ~Save.One.Soul.~ ((S.O.S))

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Congrats....nice write! short, but I enjoyed it

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Wonderfully done! I love the style and flow of this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    That's lovely, it definitely deserves the recognition, well done

  • 18 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    I really like it!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiombe aka Lady

    Deep

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Aaww.. that was so sweet.. i love the rhyme.. gr8 job with this one.. its short, but it said it all :D
    take care
    Nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by MZ.REDDBONE_1

    I luv this poem. keep up da good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by chrissy

    It's a nice poem...i can fully relate..*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Yes.....and such a charming way way to say it....

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyn

    I'm so sorry but I can't appreciate this poem although I can see the last line is descriptive I usually like short, meaningful poems which say a lot in a few words but in my opinion the only poetic line is the last one which makes it more of a quote than a poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    Oh this is a really cute poem i can feel your feelings when i read it. I like how you can express yourself in such short words. Good Job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alexis

    I really love this poem its soo sweet and short. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Weekly contest winner

    I never thought I could make the front
    page, but it happened.
    I just noticed it today and I am thrilled.
    Thank you so much P&Q for making
    my day and thank you to all the members
    who commented on my poem.
    Write On,
    Bogie

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful Bogie....well deserved.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Goes to show that few words, expressed properly, can capture!

    Congratualations ... well deserved.

  • 18 years ago

    by C

    It waz iite.could hav been longer doe..

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dear Lyn,

    If I could hold love in my hand
    To help you see and understand
    Meaning; sometimes people starving
    for love have it right in front of them
    and wont or dont see it.

    The love I have shaped in a mold
    Is again about to unfold
    Meaning; the perfect person your
    inspiration of true love once again
    comes into your life melts your heart

    For you my queen it is like gold
    True love is new love never old
    Meaning; the mold of perfection
    turns to gold as with true love
    forever they both shine on.

    Lyn, I hope this helps and thank
    you for your honest comment,
    Bogie

  • 18 years ago

    by failure by choice

    Capital job chap! brings tears to me eyes...

  • 18 years ago

    by ++*++jAsMiNe++*++

    Excellent!! I love it!!!

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