Hi!
that is a really cool poem! especially it being your 1st! :D can't wait to see what your next ones are like :D
luv alex

Hey..that's not bad for ur 1st poem..u started very well,and u even related things very neatly..nice job.....and im sorry for ur friend,u know ur really fortunate that u survived that crash...u shud thank god for that,i wish i had something to thank god for..lukin 4ward 2 ur next ones....