This poem has a beautiful flow. I like it a lot. Good job!

Oh this is so beautifully written! I love the honesty and power in your words, great job!

OH GOSH - I'm still cold from the shivers that sent down my spine!!! It was brilliant and to be honest there's so much about me that my friends dont know. Not one person knows everything about me not even my family and this made me relate to parts of the text - brilliant writing 5/5 =)

Amazing, I know that feeling through and through, Im sorr you have to go through this, but its a lesson we all must learn. Amazingly done hun.

Thankyou for you comment it couldnt have come at a better time, thankyou

Jenn

Omg that was so good i so can relate...great job i loved this poem take care with love JoSiE