Pretty good.

First stanza: it can use alot of work.. maybe do a gew more colorful words?
Second stanza: simply.. perhaps if you intensified your structure of your stanza?
Third stanza: Basically this poem could take a lot of improve ment. Not to sound harsh but this poem looks quickly made and .. perhaps rished.. and also perhaps you could put a rhyming scheme to it?

~David

Short, sad, excellent

I loved it, it had a meaning, well done

xxxxxx

Short & sharp...
love hurts...
keep it up
love
amy

It's not your best poem, but it has plenty of emotion, which is cathartic.

I'll leave this one be because although I see things to change, it's a poem that needs to be left alone.

Bret

Oh wow I love how you turned the rosses into a weapon very wicked. 5/5 =]