Wow speechless and i am telling the truth you are an excellent writer
i love this poem it is really really good
love always
tabby

I really liked this poem... You did a wonderful job discribing the sence and it was playing in my mind like a movie... Very, very nice job... I am sincerly impressed. Keep it up...

sammie

Excellent poem. You started out pretty well, the imagery used there is outstanding, but then you started to repeat yourself...a lot.

I still like it, it is most definitely different from what I am used to reading.

~Atomic

Wow. that was great. i am speachless. great work. Keep it up!
Emma 5/5

Wow. I loved your vocabulary and the way you described this. Awesome poem all around. It was a cliche topic, but your words were beautiful and it wasnt all "I want to slit my wrists/ and then I'll die/ beauty cannot emit/ Oh why do I have to cry" It was deeper then that and it was full of raw emotion. Keep it up!