Comments : Brain spread on the roof

  • 18 years ago

    by AmAnDa NiChOlS

    Very deep but i honestly think there HAS to be someone out there who loves you and cares about you. it seems to me like the meaning of this poem is that you're trying to say that nobody cares about you or if you live or die. well i dont even know you and i care. i cant stand the thought of there being a person out there who feels so bad and so isolated from everything. and by all means... i know you dont know me but if you ever ever want to talk just send me a private message or an email. for some reason i feel like i could help you and i cant just go to the next poem and forget about this one and the person who wrote it. so please by all means...dont hesitate if you need me. i have experienced some very similar feelings myself....check out my 2 latest poems if you dont mind and tell me what you think. they show how i feel. they're called "resisting the blade" and "i am not alone"

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyle Wycotte

    Gr8 poem

  • 18 years ago

    by karissa

    Really good poem...like it alot! keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by AnJolina

    Hey thats a great poem!!!!!! even if i havent meat u i would cry cause i read ur poems! kk see ur loved un like me!
    ~!ugly & unloved!~

  • 17 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    That one was actually kinda sad no gory, twisted, and sadistic business in this one; nevertheless, i thought it was great!
    five again ( im actually waiting till i read one of your poems that are crap or atleast one that deserves a 3 o 4)
    ~HazE