Comments : Some inspiration!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cherri

    You shouldn't feel so empty,
    Feeling nothing with'in,
    You should be, more openly,
    And try again and again.

    Let the pen, be your heart,
    transfer all your words through,
    Be careful, don't let them fall apart,
    Let them stay whole, and represent YOU!

    You can flow hun, just let it all out girl, *hugs*

    -*-Cher-*-

  • 18 years ago

    by Red Tears Of The Soul

    A little different for my taste, but hey, it's always good to do something new. A cute short write, a lil off and on but still pretty good. Keep up the good work. ^_^x