I loved this poem it haas so much emotion in it love it, xoxo Rach

Wow! that was great. i loved it. short and sweet. it was so powerful.
Emma 5/5

Very well written with a perfect flow and great wording. and very strong emotins.

5/5

Wow hun.. That poem was full of emotion and well written... You did an amazing job!!! Keep it up, your a really good poet... Lots of Love

!^I Love Being In Love^!

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Poem is filled with emotion 5/5
love
amy

Full of emotion...but very well written!..5/5!

I didn't enjoy it...I felt it....
Power esp. at a time when I feel so vulnerable and confused.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I think so far this is my favorite poem of yours.. out of the last 3.. another great poem.. i really thought the last line put a good effect on it.. even thought the rhyming scheme switched it still flowed nicely great job 5/5

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~!*Meaghen!~*

Another one that i really enjoyed. And another 5/5

I think brake's should be breaks. but same thing people will still get the beautiful picture you have written here. Great and Amazing poem! 5/5