Hmm..at first the title threw me off. Thought it would be a pissing and moaning poem. But the meaning goes much farther and I like it quite a lot. I would also like to thank you for the constructive criticism on my poem "Never A Decent Love Poem". Take Care.

I lyked your poem it was good.
makes me think but thats one thing i dont mind doing for you :)
um yea anyway can you comment my other poems plz :(