I really like this. once again Tyler, you've tapped into my mind completely and consumed my thoughts with your thoughts. thank you. love the poem and you....signed, Kaotic Kitty. Peace out.

I really like this. once again Tyler, you've tapped into my mind completely and consumed my thoughts with your thoughts. thank you. love the poem and you....signed, Kaotic Kitty. Peace out.

Nice! your really good at it. time is alot like that isn't it. keep writing

I like the poem but your ending is wrong. Time is eternal. Something that doesn't really exist can't really die.

Thats a nice poem i like it 5/5

Very nice. i like ur stuff. keep it up! -k-

Keep on writing. tis' wonderful indeed. u should write some more poems, and u should put a bio in your profile for others like me to read. keep it up. all my luv -Tori.

Tht was an awesome poem baby!!
I love you soo much honey!
*Forever Yours Sarah
:p
i love you baby!! and i always will........!!!

Baby i changed my name
to this
i love you honey

Baby, how are you? I miss you so much. Hopefully, I get to talk to you tomorrow!!
I love you honey forever your baby, Sarah

Thats a really Good poem you got there!

Hey Tyler,
This has to be on of my favorite poems that you wrote. Good job and keep it up, dude!

Nice.. Your a awesome writer dude.. Keep it up!! x]

WOW ur very good bro!!! keep it up!

Wow i love it ur very good lil man keep it up :]

Deep words keep up the good work

timehealsallwounds*

Hey hun i miss u i hope ur doing well. this is sarah
luv u!

Another wonderful poem, keep up the good work!

That is really good. Clever, i think. I love how you use your words and how it all fits together. Keep it up.

It was a well written poem but i do not agree with it fully the part. it was very creative and catches you of guard its ncie someone wrote a poem about this