Comments : For You. For Another.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I loved it. i was diffrent. nice flow. i really enjoyed reading this.
    Emma 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow.. this is amazing.. i loved every single word.. beautiful piece.. its so deep and profound.. keep it up
    take care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    Perhaps some day I will
    Pour your broken contents
    Onto my pillow -

    So all your pain will
    Rest with me while I dream.

    That was the best line I've ever heard in a poem! I wish I had your writing talent to collect such a deep feeling in such a small amount of words. Excellent Job, 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Wow that was a nice poem!....5/5! and keep-up-the-good-work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Very thought provoking - i sense a theme of butterflies in your poems...!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    5/5 Excellent poem it was absolutely amazing your an amazing writter..

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    This was so beautiful, you have unique imagery, this oozes emotion and there is a certain confidence radiating from this. I loved it!!

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Absolutely beautiful.. i loved it.. lots of imagery that filled my senses.. it was so full of emotion and.. and.. i cant explain it.. for me, it was reli overwhelming.. lol, if its not meant to bring about that effect, then i must be prone to being overwhelmed.. lol.. but it was reli breath-taking.. moving words
    keep it up.. 5/5
    take care
    NannO

  • 17 years ago

    by bill

    I love this. flowed nicely as all yr poems do. so much passion.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I like the different setup you used. It was VERY different but it was also VERY good. :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow, that was pretty dang good, I loved the imagery in this one.

    5.5