Comments : AAHAT....

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Aapke aane ki aahat humne to mehsoos na ki,
    dil ke darwaaze par dastakh humne to yu hi samjhi.

    Aapke deedar par bhi humko hua nahi yakeen,
    ki khuli aankho se khwaab dekhna abhi khatm hua nahi.....

    wow ur really great at this i love readin ur shiryari's i love the words u use....its an amazing feeling!!!!

    5/5
    sonam

  • 18 years ago

    by Roshni

    I luv da amt of depth ur hindi poems have..... yaar tussi cha gaye