It was such a terrible accident, and the poem expresses this so well. nothing will be able to ease away the grief from the family, and certainly not money. i suppose the man has the biggest punishment of having to live with such huge guilt of what happened. but i'll stop rambling now... brilliant poem though, u fitted in all of the emotions really well.
love u lots xxxxxxx

~*Really great work, im so srry if its true but i can relate i've lost my best friend. 5/5 keep it up i really love reading ur work*~ XoXo