Its good..

Rhyme enough? lolz i love it. its awesome. love ya babe
Raych

Aww i love this it's gr8 nice work 5/5

Nice!!!

Amazing work. keep writting!

Wowo amazing

timhealsallwounds*

Lovely. Keep it up.
XxXN-G-C-SXxX

Hey~wuts new..i havent been on awhile and yeah...just thought i would say hey and miss talkin to ya
Oxo laura marie aka sweets

Amamzing....nuff said.

Lissa

ILY Maaaaaximus.
E-mail me sometime, yeah? :(

xx

This is an amazing poem. well done. 5/5 ur a talented writer...keep writing

Wow, I really liked this poem it had such meaning behind it. You truely ave written a wonderful poem. May your heart be filled with peace and joy youngman.

sadaddy

Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiii Max!!!!

Its me.. but of course you don't know who "me" is .... its katie! write me back ya loser!

"To scream these wonderful disruptions of soul."

Love the name, SWEETIE!!!!