Wow this poem is amazing and so sad. V. deep.
You are a great poet, plz keep writing!
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Wow an excellent excellent write you are really really good great job

love always
tabby

Powerful and deep peice, very well written too.

5/5

Great poem. I liked it a lot. Keep Writting. 5/5!!
~Sandra

Your poem is so well written. I wish i could write like that Love Chloéx

Ok lets get a real comment on here. The rhyming is spectacular. Good scheme and exellent choice of words. Saying she was never saved because nobody ever heard her pain is wonderful, a great way to end it. You have such a talent, maybe you could try to apply it to another subject? There are other great depressing poems you can write that deal with other things besides cutting. Your style can be put to so many other wonderful things. Another great poem!

LOVE IT
oh my goodness
love it!!

This poem just flows...ironically because of its subject. Still it describes a haunting beauty and a very valid point. Most people do not take the time to listen but only lecture. Great job!