This is awesome with an unexpected ending!

"Spent the rest of the night
Playing Oscar the grouch"

I love those lines, great job!

This is a crazy poem I like the part where she breaks her back

That was ironic .. o.O
Lol it was really good
I didnt expect her to die . x.x
Sheesh meanie. >.<
Just kidding! lol
great job.
LoveAlways
--NerdyPants--

Nicely done... I really liked it... well written, flowed beautifuly and was amazing.. keep it up

sammie

OMG, I've come and read this a few times and never left a comment, shame on me... I love it Anthony.... you met the challenge Sunny set. Wonderful write, amazed with the ending, just goes to prove, if you don't clean up your mess, you could get hurt (or die)...... lol

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Haha, I can't believed she dies because she was geting her party hat.

How silly, nicely done though.

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