Comments : Wishing Well

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    This poem isn't meant to be very good, but it was in my old poetry book and I decided to share it with you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    ^Don't agree, I thought the story line of it was amazing. Gave me goosebumps when I got to the end, good job. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    I thought you did an awesome job! I'm enjoying this...kinda reminds me of when was 10 years old and threw all my money into this wishing well or so I thought it was :) Its a sad story...

    I love this part:

    "Well today I am back to this wishing well,
    I am here to thank you for this.
    I see now I shouldn't have asked,
    I'm glad you didn't answer my wish"

    beautiful! you got lots of talent, keep up the good work...looking forward to reading more :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Your a great writer and i love your poems great job !!!!

    keep writing
    love always
    tabby

    p.s your on my favs