This is a nice poem.. at the begining i thought: this poem would be a great song:P.. but yeah it would.. really good..!!.. 5/5!

For a 13 year old, i'm very surprised at your efforts in writing this poem. Share brilliance is expressed when you cover imaginary and expressive detail in the poem; and I must say, you have truly done that. Well done.

Much love and God bless,
Fallen*-

Wow that was good

Wicked.. straight from the heart..

Wow yes for a very young person u have talent keep all the hard work going wow x x x