I loved this!!!!
it was just amazinal!
and i loved the stanza
"refuse all the normal
refuse all the sane
look to the crazy
look to the slain"

your repetion was brill!
go u!

*****CLAPS***** That was really good! I like it a lot! like the person above me the repetition was really good! Well keep it up! By the way thanks for the comment!! lyl

~*~Elisha~*~

I love it.. you always amaze me.. *kiss*

Hello!

Wow, I'm very impressed at this poem =) very fluid, diction was well done for this style and subject matter! keep it up,

Other news! I'm happy to welcome you to FishBowl, I'm Jenn, the manager, if you have any questions or concerns dont be afirad to ask myself or you assistants (Fighter and >tornapart). I ask two things one, you read the welcome message, and two you fallow club and site rules.

=) thanks
Jenn

I had to pull out the dictionary for a few of those words! lol! Once I knew what it meant, it was awesome! lol! Just kidding! You're great! lol! 5/5!
Kris

Wooooo tahats deep u should read the poem i wrote its the truth hurts any how nice poem 5/5

Great flow in this peice, the structure is very well utiliased. the content is brilliant, very deep and well expressed with some very powerfull llines and ideas.

5/5

I loved this part:

the works of a master
the flaws of the fool
either is genius
no more than a tool

oh, jeez this piece captivated me. I loved it! Keep up the work! **5/5**

LOVE
Lolli

I loved the rhyming. 5/5....woo-hoo!

Alli

I can relate to this poem in many ways. good job! i love reading poems from other people in my age group that i can relate to. thanks for posting this!