Comments : One little slit.

  • 18 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    I really enjjoyed this writing, it made me picture someone who is always crying, feeling alone and with no one who cares.....keep writing, your really good

  • 18 years ago

    by amy

    Wow chicky! you really have a way with words... i can see that u have a very amazing talent! u can check out my poems it u would like.. i have a poem called one little slit 2 lol... but amazing job! keep up the amazing work!